Friday, November 4, 2005

Orgasm Comments

Rating: 4.6

There is no sweeter sound,
than my breath,
held hostage,
captured amidst,
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Eila Mahima Jaipaul
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Made a revisit here. On the occasion of you being recognised among the Best Poets Among Members. Loved It. Congrats.

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Great rendering. Loved it

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 10 November 2015

Sensuality and sexuality combined in the poem a beautiful creativity.

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Souren Mondal 10 November 2015

A very sensual and brilliant poem... Incredible expression of the female desire.. Beautiful...

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M Asim Nehal 10 November 2015

Sensual poem yet again..........

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Destinie Thacker 07 June 2006

I am at a loss for words on that one. But one does come to mind, Awsome!

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Simon Whild 15 November 2005

Yet another vivid experience that leaves me hot under the collar, not to mention other places. A feast of images that just keeps soaring.

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Richard Stilwell 08 November 2005

Beautiful.... So vivid I watched you in my mind. So powerful I felt you in my heart...

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Uriah Hamilton 04 November 2005

Thanks for that! ! ! ! !

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