My heart is pounding, my mind is knocking it's doors
Saying, hey fool! Have you decided, who's who?
Love is never a good thing for me never had it at school.
Heart replies with a beat, I love him so much, didn't you know?
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Again, there is a lot of poetic talent in this composition. But I would expect the English to be more lucid, because there are parts I do not understand clearly. I know that you are young, but don't give your heart to anyone at that age. Because 18 is the age of infatuation; infatuation is something that is a 'passing shower', it comes and goes. And it comes very strongly in adolescence. Good song writer, hone your poetic skills. But beware of giving your heart to anyone. If you want to give your heart to one, give it to the Lord Jesus Christ. He will take care of it for you.
nice effort to bring the importance heart among organs. 10+++
love makes you fly without wings......... wonderful expression of the inner joy and you express truly what love is at a very young age. thank you dear poetess. tony