Organic Comments

It really organic, and water with distilled thought...Since our life still under construction keep your life organic always! hahaha joking :) _Unwritten Soul

Wow, ONElia. Long time, I had not visited your poetry, but you are still a top poet.

I love this poem, there is a subtle eroticism to it. The lizard of happiness crawling across the neck and swift crossing bosom give us a hint of something more intense and yet the poem itself is scant of detail so gives chance for the imagination to fill in the gaps. Great work dear One. HG: -) x

a meaningful ink.pokes my mind.liked it.