I whispered
Talk to me
Help me
To donate faith
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i really like this poem especially 'you sighed i cried rainy eyes replied'..however, i don't really understand the 'do that' line i think that part needs a bit improving so that the poem flows a little but other than that good job! =)
I like the way it's listed it's sweet the emotion slightly bitter yet sweet
it is written exelint i love the way u play with the words it is exelent, and the tears and the heart tells it all.i love it. but then u have to have a knolage of poems to understand it.
You have expressed the idea in simple words, and yet got the message across. Good one.
Written from the heart, as always touching and wise, 10 Lynda xx
A very touching poem, whose last word sums up the most difficult part... 10
heart wrenching indeed +10 regards anjalie (read mine too THIS ONE IS FOR ME)
A moving composition. 'Help me To donate faith To donate heart' 10 for this beautiful work.
Ah, you donate your faith and heart - to love! Great read Shiraz! Best wishes! 10 Friend Thad
I like this...I feel the pain.. not sure of it's ultimate meaning however..but I like the simplicity of your words...; 0)
Very touching whisper.... 10 Tsira