Harry Carpenter(5/13/2017 10: 57: 00 PM)
You are wasting your time purporting to write in the English language. I'm sure that in your native tongue you write coherently. This poem is almost incoherent, it reads as you speak English. I have looked at a lot l your poems they suffer from the same defects. I admire your pluck but they are not up to standard. Even your best poem is defective. The site owners must be taking pity on you because of your voluminous writings.
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i was harping on mentality. he is not belonging this group. certain people discoarage good writing even Like · Reply · 1 · 3 hrs
though in the disguise of poetry much truism is said here...... if i take it seriously... the language, the grammar may be defective but the poetry is not....your thought your feelings your opinions are being cleared through this poems internationally.....which are or poetry is out of fault.....and there is a term for the poets.....poetic license.....and the meaning of the poetry is not only the poet wants...it is open ended...the readers create more than the very poet.. and it is the era of Drrida.... so we can talk a reader imposes upon any poem he goes through the status of a work.he interprets, analyses, examines and evaluates at definite meaning which is called 'Eschatological Criticism' after Derrida...Eschatology is from the Greek meaning 'doctrine of last thing'. so the reader's work has a stable meaning.......and we may keep hope on readers that they would mend my faults. to top it all a great poem on your feelings of poemhunter sir...
I would love to have your reactions Along with action For poet who has rendered disservice In the field of peace, poetry with so much of promises
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