Ordinary Poem Comments

Brilliant, Bernard. Perhaps the words are ordinary, but in combination they form a meaning that is truly transcendental. This is an absolutely brilliant verse!

Some simple words of mine Come from thoughts within; They don't touch the heart, The mind and soul of men. A superb poem, sir Bernard.

Not so ordinary, only a master could thus play with words and verses, lovely write.. enjoyed reading very much.. thanks for sharing

you have shared your poem well, but it is not an ordinary poem, it is a wonderful poem from the heart of a great poet, , if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your comments

Simple words come within only in love waiting to share. A fantastic poem shared with wise vision. Interesting poem.10