Sunday, October 4, 2015

Ordinary Life Comments

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I would rather be loved by you
Than admired by the world.
I would rather build a foundation for you
Than a fantasy for everybody.
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Suzanne Hayasaki
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Glen Kappy 16 April 2018

Exploring your earlier postings I picked this one for its title, Suzanne. I like it! Like it for the contentment it embodies, a contentment I enjoy at times but struggle with at others. A number of resonant lines here; this one could stand for the whole—I would rather grow old unknown than famous and alone. Good stuff. -Glen

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Menomonee Falls, WI, USA
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