Order Of The Bathtub Comments
Once I stood in the bathtub.
I remember the scene precisely
For its solemnity and gravity
The grey sun that set on 6037
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Great poem. These are my favorite lines: And I danced in the light of love And my soul sang the songs With words I had never learned,
Thank you, kind sir. I am grateful for your consideration and gracious thoughts. NB
An excellent write. How skillfully drawn, the nuances of love and life. Coming straight from the heart, going straight to the heart. A huge 10.
Thank you, dear Nosheen, for your generous praise. This was a very personal piece, and I was not even sure about publishing. I always appreciate your insightful comments. Thanks!
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8/6/2025 10:15:20 AM # 1.0.0
Neal, your lines If You loved me when no one else could..Or would, why should I not make you a gift Of this unwanted heart? it's pure brilliance touched with true sense of love in all it's honesty and beauty. I've added it to my favorites :)