Saturday, July 4, 2015

Orchard Of Celebrations! Comments

Rating: 4.5

Every moment in life is like celebration,
and to celebrate, it is our hearts elation.
Life is likely to be an orchard,
where nothing is impossible and hard.
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vaibhav vizard
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Vishal Sharma 17 October 2015

nicely done

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Ramesh Rai 05 July 2015

Agreed. Every moment is for celebration and it is upto you how you wish to celebrate. Well done. Beautiful job soothing and encouraging.+ 20.

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I like this, in particular your variable /isolated rhyme employment.. You begin & end the work in rhyme, as well as utilizing the term '' celebrating/celebration in your opening & closing line...Unique, and it lends an air of bonus creativity to an already quality piece of work...Well Done, V.V.! ~FjR~

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Vaibhav Vizard 08 July 2015

thanks, i was in need of your admiration!

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