Sunday, March 26, 2006

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So I am really new at this poetry game
shouldn't the end of each line sound the same?
It seems harder that way to find a word
to say what you feel or what you want heard.
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maggie signaigo
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Max Reif 20 August 2006

Seriously, though, there's something about the discipline of rhyme, in your case and some others, that allows great cleverness to come through. I very much like your skill with words.

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Max Reif 20 August 2006

you did it! (Now they say I hafta write 20 characters!)

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