Saturday, March 5, 2016

Orange Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

I saw thy beauty in sunrise
the tangerine charm of sun that delight
and equated your smooth skin to sunset
when the sun is trying to hide
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Michael Jack 22 January 2021

Romantic poem. Loved it.

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Shreya Hacks 29 July 2020

As my lover confessed and endorsed her love to me these memories are associated with sunset; Hence, I shall cherish it forever and ever

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Kevin Patrick 06 September 2018

There is such an aura about a sunrise and sunset, the striking composition of colours colliding in a sauntering rhythms. Great choice of orange as an association of love, its aura radiates with delight.

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M Asim Nehal 10 February 2019

Thank u so much......Kevin

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Darren Jkoeryo 20 April 2016

Lovely poem man 10

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 March 2016

Beauty in sunrise! ! With the praises of nature; and, to expose your love. Thanks for sharing.

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Mihaela Pirjol 09 March 2016

A beautiful, romantic love poem, written in a manner of those gentile, classical love letters. I very much enjoyed reading it!

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Valsa George 08 March 2016

Probably she must have confessed her love to you in the crimson sunlight of the setting sun! So you have fallen in love with the orange glow of the setting sun! The sunrise reminds you of her beauty! So you love both the sunrise and the sunset! A fine write!

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Nosheen Irfan 06 March 2016

Wow..that's so beautifully expressed. A love associated with sunset is called orange love. The beautiful memories of love are to be cherished forever. Loved it.10

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T Rajan Evol 06 March 2016

Nice comparison and lovely poem, Asimji.

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Souren Mondal 06 March 2016

That moment when the one we love is so precious, , .. It remains with us forever.. A beautiful poem Asim.. Loved it.

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Kelly Kurt 05 March 2016

Associating the beauty of a sunset with the beauty of the feeling of love.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 05 March 2016

A beautiful soliloquy penned with amazing craftsmanship. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Jaishree Nair 05 March 2016

Lovely lines penning sweet memories of the great moment - the declaration of love.Thanks for sharing

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M. Asim Nehal

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