I saw thy beauty in sunrise
the tangerine charm of sun that delight
and equated your smooth skin to sunset
when the sun is trying to hide
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As my lover confessed and endorsed her love to me these memories are associated with sunset; Hence, I shall cherish it forever and ever
There is such an aura about a sunrise and sunset, the striking composition of colours colliding in a sauntering rhythms. Great choice of orange as an association of love, its aura radiates with delight.
Beauty in sunrise! ! With the praises of nature; and, to expose your love. Thanks for sharing.
A beautiful, romantic love poem, written in a manner of those gentile, classical love letters. I very much enjoyed reading it!
Probably she must have confessed her love to you in the crimson sunlight of the setting sun! So you have fallen in love with the orange glow of the setting sun! The sunrise reminds you of her beauty! So you love both the sunrise and the sunset! A fine write!
Wow..that's so beautifully expressed. A love associated with sunset is called orange love. The beautiful memories of love are to be cherished forever. Loved it.10
That moment when the one we love is so precious, , .. It remains with us forever.. A beautiful poem Asim.. Loved it.
Associating the beauty of a sunset with the beauty of the feeling of love.
A beautiful soliloquy penned with amazing craftsmanship. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
Lovely lines penning sweet memories of the great moment - the declaration of love.Thanks for sharing
Romantic poem. Loved it.