Friday, November 4, 2005

Orange Leaves And Blue Sky Comments

Rating: 3.8

I must confess that this is my first time
seeing the leaves change in fall.
I laid on my back
under a rather large tree today,
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Amanda Lukas
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Leigh A. Hill 18 May 2006

what a great poem! you are not afraid to state your opinions frankly and see the truth! beautiful. love starr

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Elya Thorn 05 January 2006

Unexpected! I love it, a beautiful poem, I like the way it is changing, and the changing of the feelings, the way you describe them, the imagery is absolutly great! and indeed the end is WOW... didn't expect that! Elya Thorn.

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Ivy Christou 30 November 2005

what an ending! powerful and shows a strong heart! It is never too late to learn to appreciate yourself :) Great write! HBH

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Stuart Mason 04 November 2005

I liked the personal factor. It would have been slightly mundane without that. I also loved the supreme arrogance of the last few lines, amusing.

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Seán O' Muiriosa 04 November 2005

What a beautiful poem. You have so many great lines in there. Your imagery is amazing. Indeed, you are a poet, a very good one at that. Warm regards, Seán

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Peter A. Crowther 04 November 2005

Yes, I think it's very good, too.

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