I must confess that this is my first time
seeing the leaves change in fall.
I laid on my back
under a rather large tree today,
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Unexpected! I love it, a beautiful poem, I like the way it is changing, and the changing of the feelings, the way you describe them, the imagery is absolutly great! and indeed the end is WOW... didn't expect that! Elya Thorn.
what an ending! powerful and shows a strong heart! It is never too late to learn to appreciate yourself :) Great write! HBH
I liked the personal factor. It would have been slightly mundane without that. I also loved the supreme arrogance of the last few lines, amusing.
What a beautiful poem. You have so many great lines in there. Your imagery is amazing. Indeed, you are a poet, a very good one at that. Warm regards, Seán
what a great poem! you are not afraid to state your opinions frankly and see the truth! beautiful. love starr