Orange Disc! Comments

Sun caught between dawn and dusk- what a lovely poem, so unusual and endearing is your discerning eye. thanks Kesav. I really need to read more of your earlier poems.10

orange disc dawn and dusk.................superb

...a poem abt the natural beauty and everyday doing of the Sun..well presented in a beautiful way..color plays a beautiful role....Winnie 10 for u

So perfect way of poetic description of sun's life like its corona when gaze upon with love in one's heart..........

........GORGEOUS......so short yet so fluent and perfect.

A beautiful poem with nice imagery, love it.10+

Its great how you imagination makes sun and dusk looks human in their feelings. Beautiful poem, thanks a lot for sharing it.

What a beautiful poem about the setting sun.. truly a masterpiece of words coming together for the imagery of wonder..

nice poem, nice imagery. please read my poem on Sun. thanks

Very nice poem! Enjoyed it very much. Take a look at Athul's poems who is ten. I am sure you would enjoy it!

terrific descriptions of the sun.........keep going kesav

sweet expressions. read my poem SUNSET. you will enjoy.

Beautiful dusky poem, K. F

amazing.... a beautiful write.... lovely imagery..

a very amusing way of writing on sun rise/set!

Absolutely beautiful. How well you articulated your thoughts on the sunset, it's glorious. HG: -) xx

What a lovely time of day dusk is, so well depicted by you, I feel as though I am sitting watching it with you,10 for this, Best wishes Lynda x

Aha! Picturesque, with vivid imagery. And yes evocative as well!

So the eye of heaven bid good bye and the grey curtains were drawn, Tomorrow again they would not be meeting but departing…. A beautiful metaphor which made the ordinary so emotive and special…