Thursday, September 21, 2006

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As I board the train at six thirty in the morning
I made it just in time even though it's pouring
you're sitting right there as you always are
just like me, first row, second car
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khalil Majlaton
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Fil LeBoeuf 21 September 2006

Aw man, great poem! Haha a good laugh too. Well done mate! Check out my poem 'She stood right next to me' Its on a similar topic. Take care! ~Fil

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khalil Majlaton

khalil Majlaton

Cheverly, Maryland
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