Thursday, March 6, 2014

Orange Comments

Rating: 5.0

My grandfather’s house
bears witness to the river’s anklets
drunk by its song
she entices paddy fields and dusty dribble
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Rinzu Rajan
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" the soil is still orange leeched by parasites " petrifying images augment and complement the theme of the poem. It is worded and phased differently to suit its mood. Talented poet. Congratulations

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