Thursday, September 11, 2008

Oral Sex Comments

Rating: 3.8

One look in your eyes and tonight I am sickened
Rolling and shivering I can feel my skin crawling in bitter repulsion
All day I have been dreading the question that I knew tonight you would be asking
Lust burns in your gaze devouring me as if I were nothing more to you than a piece of meat
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Ramona Thompson
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Terence Craddock 08 April 2023

An extremely emotive and disturbing theme, forced sexual abuse conveyed with repulsion, chillingly occurring over many years is not love. I find it hard to understand why so many endure toxic abuse and fail to reach out for help. A topic bravely addressed back in 2008 that needed addressing.

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I wrote the poems 'Why Do Victims Endure Toxic Abuse' and 'Toxic Love Abuse Is Not Love', inspired by the poem 'Oral Sex', by the poet Ramona Thompson and dedicated to Ramona Thompson.

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Leah Bosse Bosse 31 January 2023

It's her truth and show shows how brave and courageous she is.

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Grotesque

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The horror of inhibitive is skilfully expressed. Great poem.

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L MILTON HANKINS 13 November 2021

I would classify this one uinder junk poetry. Why it was written is completely beyond me! And why it remains on the site digusts me more!

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Akhtar Jawad 14 September 2019

Only a bold and courageous poetess can write a poem like this.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 April 2019

MANY MEN WANT TO LAST LONGER THUS SEEK FOR ORAL AS THEY R CIRCD

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Chinedu Dike 08 March 2019

Brave utterances set aside for sober reflection. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing.

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Richard Wlodarski 04 January 2019

A profound poem about abuse. Ramona, it took courage to write this. I commend you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 July 2018

burns in your gaze devouring me as if I were nothing more to you than a piece of meat- it is the punishment of loving you......... is to be sacred........ when it falls down to carnality, then it loses its tremendous joy....... than ku dear poetess for this poem. tony

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why would u write somthing like that

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Leah Bosse Bosse 31 January 2023

Why would you ask a poet that? Why do we do anything that we do...

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No One 11 September 2008

Great poem, but it's still disgusting.

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Samantha Guinen 11 September 2008

Tthats gross............

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