Thursday, May 9, 2013

Opulence Comments

Rating: 5.0

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Run after of craving….
Following of yearning….
Betrayal of wishing…..
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Chinedu Dike 13 October 2014

Indeed poverty makes people weak as it narrows discretion. A well articulated and nicely penned poem. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 21 June 2013

Truth is such you depicted that two part fantastically decorated and beautified the theme keep it up 10

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 30 May 2013

Contentment's d best wealth as provd by yor fine poem. Kudos!

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Chandra Thiagarajan 23 May 2013

A very beautiful write, Farah! The whole poem is lovely but the lines I loved most are- Gratification, / Satisfaction & contentment are genuine lavishness. / If our thoughts starts voyage to deem! Great philosophy from so young a mind! Thanks for sharing!

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Wahab Abdul 19 May 2013

nice, the beginning is very fast with true tinge of truth, the second, reveals more truth..love it

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Karen Sinclair 15 May 2013

i love the comfortable canter of this write....also the changes of patter.... was a joy to read even if the message at points is sad the end seems positive....love this line so much...Satisfaction & contentment are genuine lavishness.

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R.j. Wynn 13 May 2013

Rich in love is hard to take away from someone, God bless

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Unwritten Soul 11 May 2013

Where our heart when our eyes here see them suffer? Who are we to blind the sight denying what in our heart? yes Farah, poverty is dangerous treat to human because of this we lose pride we may lose faith only great people will stay then but we as a human should be one and help if hands dont have fingers it wont work well so we should be fingers to work as hand of humanity a great write Farah_Soul

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Vijay Sai R 11 May 2013

a very nice poem, carrying a strong message...well written

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Payal Parande 10 May 2013

a brilliant topic you have choose, poverty do make one week for many reasons, i mean i am not saying that there are other things to live for but still it is a very important fact that we can not ignore..........good job mam....brilliant write.....again i am a fan

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Jahan Zeb 10 May 2013

Poverty makes people weak...................... What if I oppose? What if I do not agree. It makes them strong. Believe me it does Farah. It was a deep poem and the theme can be applied to any society.

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Shahzia Batool 09 May 2013

Yes, Gratification, Satisfaction & contentment are genuine lavishness. If our thoughts starts voyage to deem. yes farah, but if we try to understand it! ! ! thanks so much for this write! ! !

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