Thursday, September 22, 2005

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I'm facing you now, I have no more fear
Of you trying to rule my life,
You' ve treated me ill, and now it's quite clear,
I consider, I'm no longer your wife.
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Ernestine Northover
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Andrew Blakemore 26 January 2009

You portray the sense of bitterness with such skill in this poem Ernestine. A very well written piece indeed. Love, Andrew xx

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Duncan Wyllie 09 May 2006

Not sure where this came from but you said it with real emotion, a powerful write, Love Duncan

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Mary Nagy 23 September 2005

You really get your point acrossed here Ernestine! Sometimes I think ya just gotta say this. Very powerful. Sincerely, Mary

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