Thursday, February 28, 2019

Optimism Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fascinating words fall,
gracefully from the sky;
Kaleidoscopes of colour,
lie pleasing on the eye;
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Brian Stafford
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Practicing Poetess 28 February 2019

A descriptive and colourful poem. I like that the last 2 lies wrap up the poem with the optimism in the title.

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Richard D Remler 28 February 2019

I like the rhythm and the rhyme of this, and it's upbeat and positive. A pleasure to read. Loved it.

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Brian Stafford

Brian Stafford

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