Monday, May 18, 2020

Opposite World Comments

Rating: 3.0

What if there was a world
That was in full reverse
Where flowers pollinated bees
And aliens were the abductees
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Akhtar Jawad 24 May 2020

And then Maybe there would be a world Where I finally belonged............A thoughtful poem, we know nothing about the mysteries of nature.

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A wonderfully written poem. A must read and entertaining write. I would love to see the day when the slaves can whip their master. Onto my Poem List.

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A wonderful imaginative write. Unique and highly creative. It made me smile and if we have to ponder about these thoughts, we might have a world that is more kind and full of empathy. Liked the penultimate stanza and the 2 closure lines.

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