Tuesday, February 21, 2017

Opposing Forces Comments

Rating: 5.0

And a year has passed between us.
An eternity in days counted by the heart.
You exist in another place and time, with other damsels
in distress and jesters in your court.
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grace mariner
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Kim Barney 21 February 2017

Whoa! This is very powerful! A great poem of lost love. I especially like the ending: He is a single candle burning while you are an inferno. And while I miss your passion and your heat, I don't miss standing in the shadows of all who were before me. I want to be still for awhile, and warm myself in the luminescence of the candle's flame.

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val Rogers 21 February 2017

I admire every poetic word. VBR

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