Tuesday, July 31, 2018

Opportunity Looms.... Comments

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O overriding the pride, mind held
P phantom, appears from nowhere
P psycho being shattered in to pieces
O opportunely, soul remains calm
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage
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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 July 2018

Phantom appears from pride and this captures mind like phantom does. But soul remains calm and judges upon every action carefully. Thoughtfully and gainfully new product is yield from opportunity. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned...10

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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