Opportunity Comments

This had better be a religious piece. If it isn't I'm in trouble. Unlike the first poem, the title here does not help at all. It is much to vague for the contents. This might well be an example of a bad title. But be that as it may. It was a very nicely written piece. If this was a religious writing, it was well done, if not, then it wasn't. GW62

a finely written piece.. well done

WOW! ! ! ............Your poem is great............I loved it a loooooooooot...SUPER...10++

well done johannes i like it

An interesting poem with a lot of depth...Good write Johannes

u have deepened your the theme of this poem thru ur words and imagination.. amazing poem

a substantial poem..well written and the intense of the verses are eye catching..10

Quite a strong poem, with advanced vocaburaly! ! Well Done, I felt a lot of drama and power, reading that! 10! !