Thursday, May 24, 2018

Opium Of Optimism Comments

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While birds are singing, crematorium business is booming.
Loneliest poets know its meaning.
Mountaineers can see the tops of mountains;
Only the clouds can see the internal bleeding.
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Alam Sayed
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Dr Antony Theodore 22 August 2018

And she will respond with a gentler breeze, And you may change her through the act of love, Perhaps with a tenderer passion she will move. war, cruelties, inhuman conduct, terrible situation. cemetry, your find hope in seeming hopelessness......... love alone shall rule........ war brings nothing......... death. tony

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Bri Edwards 30 July 2018

(cont.) ...well, WAR SUCKS! many will agree, but at times it may be a necessary evil for some. otherwise.............? well, like i said: convoluted. bri :) i also don't recall theme of Cat's Cradle. : (

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Bri Edwards 30 July 2018

i read KV's novel in college, but i don't 'remember' the story. ;) this is a SERIOUS-topic poem! right? maybe too convoluted** for me to read again completely. maybe that's why i don't recall KV's story. ** i see that one definition (technical) of convolution is coiled. is that where you thought of snake? ? (cont.)

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Akhtar Jawad 08 June 2018

Opium of optimism and poison of pessimism, if I am given a chance to choose, I shall choose the opium.

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Alam Sayed 12 June 2018

Thanks for your thought provoking comment. I may choose the same. The poem criticises naive optimism not optimism by itself. I prefer optimism through activism. I tried to respond earlier but PH did not allow me. The website is always troublesome in my locality.

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Mihaela Pirjol 28 May 2018

This is a very powerful poem with amazing imagery. Great!

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Alam Sayed 28 May 2018

Dear poet Mihaela, thanks for your inspiring comment.

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Robert Murray Smith 24 May 2018

Alam, an imaginative write with great imagery. There are many memorable stanzas.++10 Robert

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Alam Sayed 25 May 2018

Thanks.Your comments are always inspiring.

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