Thursday, February 22, 2007

*ophelia The Madness Comments

Rating: 3.5

Here is where.....
Madmen write verse for their amputated lovers
with blue fountain pens and quills of clotted ink
Scribbling morbid memories yellow with old malaria
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Emily 25 March 2018

Putting paragraphs into screed from a right-wing blog does not poetry make.

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Vikash Ranjan 22 October 2016

Madmen write verse for their amputated lovers

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Brian Jani 05 May 2014

Nice vocab use Ted keep writing

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John Lyday 08 April 2009

Good tone and theme. The language is remarkable.

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Lee Crowell 23 March 2009

I just read all your poems that begin with an asterisk assuming that these are your latest work. This one is my favorite. I feel I could have written this, well, maybe only if I were you. The point is...

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Sally Plumb 24 February 2009

I can understand why your poetry is so popular

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Eddie Roa 20 January 2009

This is a great write. I like poems that are deliciously dark. You added rawness to the already demented realm of this Shakesperean tragic tale.

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Loreta Muskardin 05 December 2008

Very impressing..thanks for sharing this poem

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James Roberts 21 November 2008

An excellant poem reminds me of the liverpool poets but this poem is much richer I'll read some more your work over the weekend jim

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Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid 17 November 2008

How painfuly beautiful catharsis!

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Ophelia Payne 25 July 2008

Oh yes fellow word smith I now know, How wonderful. Ophelia I am madness is my game poetry my game. Thank you, Ophelia

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John Tiong Chunghoo 13 January 2008

yes, people write poetry to express themselves, their ideas, feelings, whatever..that keeps them sane. not everybody is looking for fame ted.

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C.R. Ebowski 24 February 2007

Bravo....Bravo....this is truly impressive - well done Ted!

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Well Dude, if you're not published already, you really should be! This is fresh and imaginative language, for sure!

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Dee Daffodil 22 February 2007

Wow! ! ! ! This one is very powerful! For once...I think I'm actually speechless! Hugs, Dee

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