Sunday, May 22, 2016

Ophelia In Three Acts For Linda Clayton Comments

Rating: 5.0

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My mother fussed over me.
As she combed my long golden hair,
she chanted snatches of old lauds,
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Bharati Nayak 29 May 2016

Wow- -What a beautiful write! How through this poem we come to understand the characters from Shakeapear's play.The emotional state of a lady with an expectation of marrying prince Hamlet. goes through three stages - -First when there was confused state of happiness and sadness, second when she could not tell her happiness from sadness and lastly when she was awaiting a return of a happiness free of sadness. In the last stage she was getting freedom.Her happiness was no more dependent on others' kindness or sympathy.Thanks for sharing the marvelous write.

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Susan Williams 22 May 2016

Gasp! ! ! ! ! Daniel, you took Shakespeare on! ! ! And you not only survived, you astonished. You stand side by side with the Great Bard himself and I believe he would have been charmed and excited by this. I know I am. What an intriguing thing you have done, Now my head is swirling with questions and wonders. Absolutely the top-notch writing that I have come to expect from you. I wish I could be as learned as you in commenting but I am still gasping in astonishment and delight and, yes, envy! 10000000000000000000000000000000++++++++++

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