Ophelia Comments

Very passionate! Lovely and intense. I enjoyed it!

Wow thats awesome good job Its beautiful

awe[3 this is a really touching poem. it really portrays emotion and it's a work of art. keep up the good poetry...

I like it, it's so sweet.: D

aaawww, such a beautiful poem. :)

Dude, Ophelia sounds hot.

really great poem David, it's really touching and very romantic. Write more :)

ike it..... Such a calm loving voice

Oh, this is a pure gem crafted in brilliance, artistry, unveiling a deep love manifestation. Ophelia's portrayal is fraught with sweetness, heavenly shape, in stillness. Both romantic and celestial. Love it! Thanks a lot for sharing it, David!

Oh you are gifted my man very gifted...I invite you to come to Poetfreak...its another poet site but I always come back here to poemhunter its were I grew my archives for my poems...actually started on a place called IMVU smiles site were I wrote my first poems still there I repost what I have here and on poetfreak there as well...smiles....if not for imvu i wouldnt be here either intresting that....smiles brilliant write enjoyed enjoyed it so much

very romantic and nice to read David

Nicely written. It holds your attention from beginning to end. Keep it up.

Oh! my good Happy Ophelia! ! ! ! That is a song a tribute to love. Oh! blessed Ophelia, envied Ophelia. Beautiful Poet. TFS

So tenderly written with great flair, a haunting melody of unquenchable love! ! Excellent write! !

As you requested I have read this piece and am impressed by both the flow and the use of language. I shall read more of your work.

ophelia is a wonderful evocative name to call our deepest desire. I felt it burning inside me too. thank u!

...I chased the flesh that smell like morning sprinkled in snow And a heart that's like the calling of the birds in the safari... i love those lines. Good write!