Wednesday, September 16, 2015

Opening The Can Comments

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With a single twist
Your can opener words
Crave into my tin
A jagged edge
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Susan Lacovara
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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 September 2015

Please read lines instead of lies.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 September 2015

Marvellous expression. A stunning poem that touches the heart. The favourite lies are ........ All the contents of my heart Dumped into a dish Of both dangerous despair And decadent remembrance To be gobbled and swallowed And choked upon As I, famished, Hobble back to the table.....Thanks for sharing......10

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