Sunday, September 18, 2016

Opening Senses Comments

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Sitting around camp fires through the years, quietly re-
sponding to nature within, becoming one with it's essence
without resisting at all.
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Daniel Brick 21 September 2016

This is a wonderful poem! In some ways it's a poem about poetry because you describe yourself writing by a campfire and then describe what is going on in your Poetic Mind. And I see the warmth and light of the campfire as an image of the much larger source of both LIGHT and WARMTH that ultimately is your inspiration. Light is the content of your poiems, the truths conveyed, and warmth is the emotional effect, in trhis case, peace.

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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