Friday, December 23, 2016

Opening Our Minds To Dreams Comments

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Nighttime bursting open after day is done, lighting the skies
with twinkling stars and a pale moonlight, opening up our
minds to sleep and dreams throughout the night.
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Daniel Brick 25 December 2016

Your poem records the opening of your mind to the mystery and wonders of night - it is the other side of of consc-iousness that you admit into your existence just as life and death are the two sides of Life Itself. This poem is marked by a confidence you have in these turnings of consciousness and life. You are tackling a really massive subject in a realm of invisible realities. But you maintain you sense of humility.

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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