Friday, July 13, 2018

Opening Of Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

C-ome
I-nto
N-ew
D-awn's
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 July 2018

A fascinating write that conveys a lovely day. Nice imagery.10++++

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Irfanulla Shariff 13 July 2018

Sunrise….the opening of day is breathtaking. Great birthday poem. Very well penned! Thanks for sharing. Big 10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 July 2018

Brilliant...absolutely brilliant! Excellent selection of vocab! Top marks..........................(10/10)

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Bernard F. Asuncion

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