Tuesday, December 2, 2008

Opened Eyes Comments

Rating: 4.3

I only ask
of one simple task
come down from the clouds
and open your eyes
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Libbie Jones
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Brianna Trombley 17 January 2009

beautiful meaningful poem, great write, i like the ending it was sorta a twist, and i know how you feel, thanks for sharing

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jennifer hall 10 December 2008

i love this poem...great job

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Fiona Davidson 02 December 2008

I hope your friend is reaing your wors Olivia...well written...thank you...

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Libbie Jones

Libbie Jones

Saginaw, Michigan
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