Monday, December 3, 2007

Open Your Eyes, I'M The One You'Re Looking For! (Short) Comments

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I can't seem to get you off my mind
Ooh boy you know you're really fine
When i think about you, how the hours fly
Can't you see, I want you to be mine!
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Thad Wilk 04 December 2007

3mo! I personally like the poem, add another verse or two and it would be a 10 for you! ! Thad

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Angie Lampkin 03 December 2007

its really good i like it

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Brian Mills 03 December 2007

hey gurl.......loved it! ! ! nice write! ! ! **standing O...many claps** Brian~

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no need ta knw
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