Thursday, November 19, 2015

Open Your Eyes And You Will See Comments

Rating: 4.8

Todays world may never know
The beauty it once was.

Whatever path that we may take,
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Cameron Sullivan
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Dr Antony Theodore 07 January 2016

We are stuck in an endless cycle, Always running the same few miles. think of the creation the beauty it was...... so many thoughts about life and living. thank you. tony

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Cameron Sullivan 17 February 2016

It's always been something that I have had a mind about. Watching people run in place as they walk the same familiar path of their every day life. So I decidedto put it in my own words. Thank you for the comment Dr. Tony

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Joe Davis 20 November 2015

Hi Cameron-This is my kind of poem, I really enjoyed it! A 9 from me.

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Cameron Sullivan 20 November 2015

Thank you! ! Kinda new to the whole poem thing, so I'm doing my best to write good ones!

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