Tuesday, August 11, 2009

Open Your Eyes... Comments

Rating: 5.0

When we open our eyes,
We can see all the lies,
The ones we despise,
The things we deny,
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Victoria McBroom
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Rishav Rastogi 18 August 2009

We can see all the lies, The ones we despise, The things we deny, The things we hate technically very well connived message and very well representation of thoughts in rhythmic way...

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David Harris 11 August 2009

Victoria, a poem of an affair gone wrong through outside influences. Very well done. Top marks and thanks for sharing it with us. Hugs David

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