Saturday, January 19, 2008
Open Your Doors For Me Comments
Rating: ★3.5
I'm at death's door, but theres no answer,
I'm asking to leave this world a little faster.
I knock harder, I knock louder; still no reply.
Why's it disapproved for me to die?
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Lime and Tequila with a Splash of Pineapple
24 January 2008
Love the final line, very different take on 'suicidal' thoughts. A well-written and effective piece of poetry. L&T
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7/19/2025 11:36:21 AM # 1.0.0
i like it, but it seems a bit shallow. it might need more depth. actually, it's nearly perfect. forget my last sentence.