As I opened my wrists,
The pain was sweet,
A reminder of life,
Of which is true,
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Oh my.... i love this. I love it so much. I can't say I completely agree with it, but I love it! Great job Kieran!
this is probably my favourite so far. its very well written and very deep(:
this is exactly right. and i would know. and you summed it up perfectly with only a few wordz! amazing. as usual.
I just happened upon this poem and I'm glad I did. It's breathtaking and very deep. I like that you kept the length rather short because that way it didn't detract from the meaning. I love it.