Tuesday, July 27, 2010

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Rating: 2.3

As I opened my wrists,
The pain was sweet,
A reminder of life,
Of which is true,
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Kieran J1996
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Aria Siren 08 October 2013

I just happened upon this poem and I'm glad I did. It's breathtaking and very deep. I like that you kept the length rather short because that way it didn't detract from the meaning. I love it.

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Søren Valentine 20 May 2013

Oh my.... i love this. I love it so much. I can't say I completely agree with it, but I love it! Great job Kieran!

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Tamika Tucker 05 August 2010

really nice :) i love this poem. this is one of my fav :)

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Celiene Watts 30 July 2010

this is probably my favourite so far. its very well written and very deep(:

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this is exactly right. and i would know. and you summed it up perfectly with only a few wordz! amazing. as usual.

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Brooke H 29 July 2010

I really like this poem. =]

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