Wednesday, June 17, 2009

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Your words so alluring
our innocence destroyed
trapped, smothered, neglected, bored
nothing you've ever shown me
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LeighAnna Williams
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Danny H 21 June 2009

the metaphors you use in this poem are brilliant 'too bad you still can't see this camera of life is lying, and that what i feel for you just has to be real'

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