Wednesday, April 27, 2005

Open Thine Eyes Critic Comments

Rating: 4.9

The critic sits bored on his high horse
wasting valuable moments
allowing time to spill away
like rain down a gutter
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Albert E. Neumann
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Cassie C 29 April 2005

Good poem. The first stanza is very strong and the imagery is effective.

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Mary Nagy 27 April 2005

Truly a great poem and wonderful message. Very nice! Sincerely, Mary

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Albert E. Neumann

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