Thursday, May 21, 2009

Open Them Comments

Rating: 3.1

Open them, open them
let the light shine,
Release the binds
of chains and twine.
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Mahfooz Ali
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SylvaOnyema Uba. 20 April 2018

Equality and freedom.

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Savita Tyagi 19 January 2016

Very refreshing. Thanks for sharing.

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Harivansh sharma 05 February 2015

A Lover of Liberty can write such poem..Love has no barriers,it is born free.

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Kesav Easwaran 25 May 2009

Good inspirational write...i liked the highly expressive line- 'desire to be a part of it'...10

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the windows of freedom...where the poets souls can soar..free un chained poem with flying wings...10+++

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the windows of freedom...where the poets souls can soar..free un chained poem with flying wings...10+++

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Bright Rose 21 May 2009

soooooooo well written, I really loved it, it's artistic and well written, you have a gift

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Noha El3wdy 21 May 2009

indeed we need to open them otherwise we would kill them

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Mahfooz Ali

Mahfooz Ali

Lucknow (U.P.) India
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