Saturday, June 10, 2017

Open The Cage Comments

Rating: 4.5

Let the cage of your heart open
For your friends to fly away.
The pets get tired after some time
And look to sky for better flights.
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Prof Niamat Ali Murtazai
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Jazib Kamalvi 23 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Niamat. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks.

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Jazib Kamalvi 23 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Niamat. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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B.m. Biswas 10 June 2017

This is a good one.. I enjoy it... Let the cage of your heart open For your friends to fly away....... it is reversely told... Beautiful.

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