Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Friday, February 3, 2017

Open Sight Comments

Rating: 3.8

Open sight

Confide to today
And seek the way
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 December 2021

A motivational piece of work sir..... thanks for sharing

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Ananda Krishnan 27 February 2018

Loved it

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Richard Wlodarski 26 February 2018

Truly inspirational! Full of wisdom. Excellent write! Hasmukh, Congratulations on Poem Of The Day!

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Bharati Nayak 26 February 2018

Open sight Confide to today And seek the way That shall take you to tomorrow With lot more things to follow- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Only those colors- - - - - - A lovely write about poetry- - Being open to insight we can find wonderful ways that can bring honor to our lives.

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Loaded with lovely lessons is this positive poem! Well done my friend!

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Savita Tyagi 26 February 2018

So beautiful and inspirational. Congratulations and thank you so much for sharing.

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Lyn Paul 26 February 2018

So very beautiful to read and to start ones day. Full of optimism like a prayer. One to save. Amazing picture.

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Anil Kumar Panda 26 February 2018

Wonderful poetry. Enjoyed. Congratulations.

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James Mclain 26 February 2018

Mr.Amathalal, congratulations on your poem of the day.. James McLain

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 February 2018

It's a fabulous poem quite insightful! Many congratulations for this beautiful poem being chosen as POD!

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Siddartha Montik 26 February 2018

Wonderful Poem on 'Open Sight' (Vision) .. as well like a wise advises bundled in pure and simple verses. Thank you for sharing sir! ! With feeling so upright You are on the open sight, But try to bring Only those colours That can bring honour.. stanzas impressive! ! Congratulations for your this being been selected for POD! 10++!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 February 2018

One must have a lesson that he oughtn't repeat mistakes. Beautiful poem with meaningful theme. Thanks and congratulations for the member poem of POD.

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Tom Allport 26 February 2018

a positive write that shines a light in the darkest places? ....................well penned Hasmukh

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Nudershada Cabanes 26 February 2018

Well expressed counsel in a form of poem. Keeping an open sight leads one to many paths of life. Congrats on your member poem of the day.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 26 February 2018

Moving on with positive approach will definitely lead towards the beam of light/knowledge. Congrats on the poem of the Day. Regards.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 February 2018

An excellent Open Sight poem, torturing the self whole night, to present this comment IF it´s alright. Congratulations for being chosen as Member Poem Of the Day, Mr. Hasmukh! I have enjoyed a very lot! A 10 and much much more for the vote. You have created 17692 poems, WOW!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 February 2018

Excellent advice here: repeat no mistakes! Till today, you have published here on PH 17.692 poems. Now is my WOW, doubled. Thank you for sharing this very enjoyable poem, Mr. Hasmukh!

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Chinedu Dike 26 February 2017

Beautiful rendition of words. An insightful motivational poem elegantly brought forth in good rhyme scheme with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Hasmukh and do remain blessed.

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Sylvaonyema Uba 26 February 2017

The future shall be bright And much to the delight With feeling so upright You are on the open sight Poem with good counsel. Embellished with good rhyme and rhythm. A musical poem. Nicely expressed. Sylva.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 26 February 2017

Beautifully envisioned nuggets of wisdom presented through equally beautiful poem. Congrats on poet of the day.

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Hans Vr 26 February 2017

Very well written, full of wisdom. Congrats, Hasmukh

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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