Open sight
Confide to today
And seek the way
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Truly inspirational! Full of wisdom. Excellent write! Hasmukh, Congratulations on Poem Of The Day!
Open sight Confide to today And seek the way That shall take you to tomorrow With lot more things to follow- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Only those colors- - - - - - A lovely write about poetry- - Being open to insight we can find wonderful ways that can bring honor to our lives.
Loaded with lovely lessons is this positive poem! Well done my friend!
So beautiful and inspirational. Congratulations and thank you so much for sharing.
So very beautiful to read and to start ones day. Full of optimism like a prayer. One to save. Amazing picture.
Mr.Amathalal, congratulations on your poem of the day.. James McLain
It's a fabulous poem quite insightful! Many congratulations for this beautiful poem being chosen as POD!
Wonderful Poem on 'Open Sight' (Vision) .. as well like a wise advises bundled in pure and simple verses. Thank you for sharing sir! ! With feeling so upright You are on the open sight, But try to bring Only those colours That can bring honour.. stanzas impressive! ! Congratulations for your this being been selected for POD! 10++!
One must have a lesson that he oughtn't repeat mistakes. Beautiful poem with meaningful theme. Thanks and congratulations for the member poem of POD.
a positive write that shines a light in the darkest places? ....................well penned Hasmukh
Well expressed counsel in a form of poem. Keeping an open sight leads one to many paths of life. Congrats on your member poem of the day.
Moving on with positive approach will definitely lead towards the beam of light/knowledge. Congrats on the poem of the Day. Regards.
An excellent Open Sight poem, torturing the self whole night, to present this comment IF it´s alright. Congratulations for being chosen as Member Poem Of the Day, Mr. Hasmukh! I have enjoyed a very lot! A 10 and much much more for the vote. You have created 17692 poems, WOW!
Excellent advice here: repeat no mistakes! Till today, you have published here on PH 17.692 poems. Now is my WOW, doubled. Thank you for sharing this very enjoyable poem, Mr. Hasmukh!
Beautiful rendition of words. An insightful motivational poem elegantly brought forth in good rhyme scheme with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Hasmukh and do remain blessed.
The future shall be bright And much to the delight With feeling so upright You are on the open sight Poem with good counsel. Embellished with good rhyme and rhythm. A musical poem. Nicely expressed. Sylva.
Beautifully envisioned nuggets of wisdom presented through equally beautiful poem. Congrats on poet of the day.
A motivational piece of work sir..... thanks for sharing