Sunday, January 4, 2015

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Syncopation filling this entire being with a vibrant and
colorful music, intertwining with the essence of life.

Incessant rhythms taking off into distant lands where all
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Daniel Brick 04 January 2015

The first stanza states your theme succinctly. In the second stanza you bring in INTUITION which sets the stage for non-verbal methods of contact. But it's the third stanza that most impressed with its imagery.The poem comes to fitting climax with the IMAGINATION providing a ladder of escape (so to speak) from problems that resist solution.

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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