Open Palms (Kissing You Goodbye) Comments

You've out done yourself Aria. This is truly a master piece. I especially liked the beginning with those descriptive words. Trapped, Suffocating, Straight-jacketed, Clasped. I love that kind of emphasis! Amazing Write!

This is one of your best! I like the style...how so few words express much thought...at times you used only one well selected word...also the rhyme pattern...Don't get me wrong These prison walls Are more lovely than most And I wouldn't mind Being held If it wasn't for the host...And if I'll ever Climb from your Hands to your heart There is no guarantee That you'll even let me stay