Saturday, September 21, 2013

Open Or Closed? Comments

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A closed book will not heal
If it does not open, No one will know how you feel
A closed door, does have a key
But are you welcome, What do you see?
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Lyn Paul
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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 May 2020

An opened mind is needed so much A wonderful way to stay in touch An opened heart can be felt by all It can guide so many it can stop the fall....impresssive lines. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Bri Edwards 12 May 2017

i have some trouble with this and am limited in time and brain cells. besides, i commented already. i shall move on. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 01 July 2016

:) soon it shall once again be my job to open and close my mouth. it shall be supper time! bri :))

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 April 2016

Even if in doubt! Thanks for sharing.

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Bri Edwards 23 June 2015

“polish”? isn’t that in eastern Europe? oh, you mean clean? no wonder we can’t see out our windows! “A closed hand, must reach out It must open that fist, even if in doubt” ………………… Nice. I so enjoy good rhyming, which this has, but sometimes the effort [to rhyme consistently] interferes [I feel] with expressing the meaning(s) of the poem. but I’ll pass you on this one, THIS TIME! I was trying to think of your last name when I came across it in a comment you posted on a Kelly Kurt poem. bri :)

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Danny Draper 28 September 2013

An open mind and accepting heart are key. Well considered.

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Mark Dillon 21 September 2013

So true, it's up to us all really. A warm heart always shares its radiance, thank you for sharing yours.

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