Saturday, October 17, 2020

Open One Ocean Comments

Rating: 4.5

Screams at an azure ocean
bounce back in waves to me.
Egos spill over with frustration
of wants never meant to be.
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Greg Gaul
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Bernard F. Asuncion 18 October 2020

A well composed poem. Truly fantastic....5 stars*****

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Khairul Ahsan 17 October 2020

'Fragile in nascent notion bound by fearing fates are we. Wishes seem a mystic potion from which we will not be free.' - Nice, loved these words of wisdom!

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