Sunday, September 13, 2009

Open Heart Surgery Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm letting the scalpel draw across my chest
And letting the blood flow out my veins
Sitting on the table and I'm wide awake
Watching your hands reach in and grab my heart
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Jake Andrews
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Alecia Nak 13 September 2009

woow this poem is good and i like the details and descriptions; great job and its very deep..

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