Open Grave Comments

Born to die one day! With the muse of the ways of life. Nice work.

A very poignant write with deep thoughts.

................................excellent! Warmly, Jerry

Astonishing depth in 28 words.10.

Returning soon; everything changes...

cold... real... emits power with a precise hand... good poetry!

Short but very concise - packed with meaning & emotion - great poem.

This poem is incredible, simple yet filled with emotion, Truly magnificent. :)

So very deep. Your poetry always inspires contemplation within me.

And never will be.. Lots of depth (Not the grave) , your poem.. It is more than it seems. I like it a lot. Jim Troy