The door was open,
Easily I entered the room,
There were so many beautiful things,
That I remained completely engrossed in those,
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This is what happens at times to many of us.....be it a full moon sky or a pleasant sun rise or a sun set or something as you have said about those beautiful things in a room...we get absorbed in those things with no mind to get out of it....beautiful description you have given in this poem...interesting very much
A beautiful poem! I like your simple, clean and clear cut expression... keep it up!
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