I am feeble, weak and ill but don't challenge me
Because I am soldier by birth with sword in hand
For every action I do carry justification as a plea
Till last breath I have decided as a rock to stand
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Col, you seem comfortable with the rhymes here but you have no concept about meter. If you're going to keep composing this kind of formal poetry, read some books on formal verse, the best one being Paul Fussell's Poetic Meter and Poetic Form. Good luck. If you'd like, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Let me know how you like it. Yrs, JC
I am student of English language and literature and poetry is my passion.I do know what is rhyme and meter but after reading all of you poems I failed to understand your meter and rhyme.Stay blessed